Methods used- defining literacy and showing how it has changed throughout the years, and what the internet might have in store for the future. Materials- acrticles from class, as well as online database search. Key Words- I like how you used the definition of literacy early on, then you can show how it changes later. Uses- use other people's opinions to generate one of his own on the topic. Limits- no real factual research can be obtained until many years down the road.
Aims/Purposes---to explain the many uses of the internet. Methods---Uses the bridge metaphor to explain how the internet is more stable than other forms of communication. Materials---Uses sources from class as well as an outside source Keywords/keyphrases---The internet has changed the ways in which we engage amongst ourselves. Uses---paper is overall well-written Limits---Could use a little more personal input
That is a very well-written essay. It flows perfectly and is easily understandable. I really like your bridge metaphor. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteI like the flow. I especially like how you give good counter arguments to Hedges. Very easy to read, and good choice of words.
ReplyDeleteMethods used- defining literacy and showing how it has changed throughout the years, and what the internet might have in store for the future.
ReplyDeleteMaterials- acrticles from class, as well as online database search.
Key Words- I like how you used the definition of literacy early on, then you can show how it changes later.
Uses- use other people's opinions to generate one of his own on the topic.
Limits- no real factual research can be obtained until many years down the road.
Aims/Purposes---to explain the many uses of the internet.
ReplyDeleteMethods---Uses the bridge metaphor to explain how the internet is more stable than other forms of communication.
Materials---Uses sources from class as well as an outside source
Keywords/keyphrases---The internet has changed the ways in which we engage amongst ourselves.
Uses---paper is overall well-written
Limits---Could use a little more personal input